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16: Magnum Farce

[Chapter 0: The Obligatory Introductory Arc]

16: Magnum Farce

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A protestor breaks into Detulux Incorporated demanding to see the manager, not realising that they are biting off more than they can chew...


Page Notes

Episode published on Wednesday 5th of April, 2006.

I have no idea why this strip is so messy, presumably I forgot to clean off the scanner surface before scanning this in. It almost distracts from that sign in the first panel that I added because I realised after colouring this that I had left a huge empty space in the corner of that panel and felt the urge to fill it. Although, rather than fill it with proper background, I went with the old "advertise here" gag.

This strip, like many of the earlier ones, has hackneyed attempts at doing the sort of "manatee gag" that Family Guy does (now a discredited form of comedy in some circles), where a joke's punchline is to cut away to something completely different and yet relevant. There is a reason I stopped doing this.

Pain uses a .41 Magnum, because when I was researching guns I found out that the drawback of larger calibres is their tendency to deafen everyone they are fired around - there's a reason people wear earplugs when at a shooting range. However, I'm pretty sure that the .41 is just as deafening as the .44, but what you can't see is that I am waving my hand as hard as I can right now (you'll laugh at that if you're a fan of TVTropes).

Tagged: Location - Detulux HQ, Location - Paris, France, Max Valerion, Melvin Pratt the Environ-mental Protestor, Newbie the Henchman

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Transcript

Title - 16: "Magnum Farce"

(The stand-off continues.)

Pain: I was always a big fan of Dirty Harry. Not the sequels, they were crap.
New guy: But what about the one where he harpoo-
Pain: (cutting off the henchman mid-sentence) -Crap. Eastwood got too old.

(There is a superfluous sign in the background.)

Sign: Empty space - advertise here and make the artist rich! Detulux Inc. Apply within - call 089-THIS-NUMBER-IS-FAKE-BECAUSE-I-LEFT-EMPTY-SPACE-AND-FELT-THE-NEED-TO-FILL-IT.

(The scene cuts to an elderly, balding Clint Eastwood holding up a man behind a booth with a 44. Magnum, while holding a Zimmer-frame in one hand. The man in the booth holds up his hands in shock. The booth is red and is marked with the words "POST OFFICE".)

Clint Eastwood: Make my pension, punk.

(The scene cuts back to Pain and the protester. The new guy is still admiring Pain's guy curiously.)

New guy: Didn't he use a .44? That's a .41.
Pain: Sure, the .44 is great, if you like being deaf by thirty.

(The scene cuts again to a SWAT officer in body armour firing a .44 off-panel. The next panel reveals that he was firing it in a room of bald, armed thugs dressed in yellow, both of which now have bleeding ears from burst eardrums.)

SWAT officer: Those were warning shots, now drop your guns or else!
Thug 1: Wha?
Thug 2: All I can hear is a high-pitched whine...

(The scene cuts back to Pain and the protester again. The protester is getting impatient.)

Protester: EXCUSE ME? ARMED ACTIVIST ON THE ROOF HERE?
Pain: Oh, right. SORRY.

(Pain smiles and sticks his tongue out as he fires off a shot with his .41 revolver.)

SFX: BLAM!